DnB First song for my E.P in works, need feedback :)

[Third Focus]

Hi peeps on dnbforum,
So i've started music since 2009 and getting kinda fed up with how my intro's sound and haven't done Dnb E.P before ever, so this will be my first

https://soundcloud.com/thirdfocus%2Fteaser-work-in-progress-third-focus-rebellion-will-rise-year-2124-forthcoming-ep

Any feedback would be very helpful, only got my headphones for mixing/mastering so ain't that great apart from using Span, bx meter for visual reference. Started listening to trailer music, epic music by companies which influencing me to write better intro's for my songs and each song will have a meaning as writtin own back story to the E.P for extra motivation. Also im actually using Muti-band compression hell lot more instead of sticking to volume automation/norm compressor, might put one on the synth but don't know if theres enough low end from headphones lol. Also im sticking to making my own drum samples well from addictive drums 2, and not samples still need to fix the drums up.

Cheers,
ThirdFocus.

 

[Soul Of Seun]

Seems a little muffled on the mixdown. This is really not my vibe of DNB, but it's not bad overall.

 

[Inna Selez]

Pretty good teaser. Only maybe it's better to cut in half first 16 seconds intro and add more drums.