first 'real' track...

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by rysk, Jun 2, 2012.

  1. rysk

    rysk Part-time waster

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    ...and it's nowhere near done, still got A FUCK LOAD to do with it as well as getting the drums EQ'd properly and get it all levelled out (bit difficult without access to a decent pair of cans atm) but this is what i've managed to shit out so far today...

    but yeah...really need a fresh pair of ears in this one, bare in mind that i've only been doing this for a couple weeks and any suggestions you make i probably won't even understand, but give it a shot.

     
  2. dirty breaks

    dirty breaks Guest

    its shit.




    have a good day.


    xx
     
  3. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    what uve got so far sounds alrite for a few weeks but it really does need alot of work man
    some of the synths are cool but need some work and the other bit for the hook or watever keep the idea of it but scrap that synth
    drums sound alrite but need some eqing an shit
    just keep at it man
    good first try
     
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    rysk Part-time waster

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    love ya

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    safety, will bare it mind.
     
  5. dirty breaks

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    faget.


    so what you using then, ahmed? cracked frooty loopz and a cracked copy of massive?
     
  6. rysk

    rysk Part-time waster

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    perfectly *ahem* legit fruity loops and no, not massive.
     
  7. dirty breaks

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    lerl. get a mac and buy logic. trussssssss meeeeeee fam.
     
  8. rysk

    rysk Part-time waster

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    naaaaaaaaaah fam.

    FL's got everything i need for the time being.
     
  9. equilibrium

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    wtf is happening? Plus rep to both of you.
     
  10. dirty breaks

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    at least torrent a real DAW for fucks sake. and learn music theory. stop smoking the weeds and spend the money on piano lessons.
     
  11. Sweaty Teddy

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    I personally don't like FL but you can't say it's shit, it's all down to personal preference and it's obviously just as good as logic and cubase when people like Spor use it and I bet he makes better tunes than you.
     
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    rysk Part-time waster

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    well...why don't you...like...go torrent...like...a real FACE


    AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! how do you like dem apples?!
     
  13. ThePapa

    ThePapa Suffragette City..

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    Dem apples is RAW. To the floor.
     
  14. dirty breaks

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    ...did someone say Apple? i like Apple. Buy a Mac. best compooters evaaaaah! 

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    (y)

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    yeah i hear what you're saying, but...




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    (^that's 'DJ ahmed' btw)
     
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  15. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    its not what you use its how you use it.

    just cos you might use logic doesnt make ur tunes better than someone on fl
    especially when you have no talent and look like netsky
     
  16. dirty breaks

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    I know this already...

    I know this...

    And how do you know this? oh wait you don't.

    Maybe I am Netsky.
     
  17. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    your netskys talentless retarded half brother thats how i know
     
  18. dirty breaks

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    shut up molak. go eat some potatoes and chase leprechauns around your garden.
     
  19. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    i would but its raining out when the sun shines ill follow the rainbow and mug that little leprechaun fucker
     
  20. brokenspud

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    i can't believe...i have really read all this... -_-

    anyway apart from leprechauns hunting... the clip is not sh*t, but isn't a "real" track, it lack an intro it lack a proper buildup and so on, let's say it's a good starting point... i'll not talk drums because you stated there's a lot of work to do... the melody is nice but lacks some sparks, i'd make a rising buildup instead of dropping directly from the breakdown also... and finally the lead and reese are a bit cheesy, try some tape distortion should give 'em a bit more of character.

    keep doin' ;)