first real attempt at producing dnb could i have some crits

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Sirenz, Dec 18, 2010.

  1. Sirenz

    Sirenz New Member

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    So basicly i previously produced dubstep and want to start producing shady dnb i have a first attempt and was wondering if there was anything i could improve on or change to make the whole thing sound nicer. thanks ps you can critic this as hard as you want.
    thanks.
    http://soundcloud.com/sirenz/zig-zag-v3-sirenz
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    i have updated the kick and fx if you would like a listen :)
    http://soundcloud.com/sirenz/zig-zag-v4-sirenz
     
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  2. PandaMindset

    PandaMindset Does not eat bamboo.

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    That's a good start. You should try and add a heavier kick though. Maybe throw in som effects in the beggining aswell.
     
  3. DJ_LAB

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    Yeah I agree that the kick needs to have more bass to it; you could push the eq up below 100 Hz on it. Good drum programming with nice variation, and the echoing click sounds that come in towards the end of the clip work well with the track.
     
  4. Sirenz

    Sirenz New Member

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    thank you guys ile see what i can do.
     
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    Fishy:) Active Member

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    Wow this ur first tracK i think its real good for a first track lovin that bass
     
  6. Scatcat

    Scatcat It don't mean shit

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    nice little steppa
     
  7. Phat_Sam

    Phat_Sam Well-Known Member

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    yeah mate. nice

    like the bass. just need to neaten it up and add some fx and stuff. The kick needs a little bit more punch but other than that it's fine!
     
  8. DNBusa

    DNBusa PROOF IS N THE PRODUCTION

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    not a bad tune could use a bit more work like some more drums rolling around in there some where good work nice tune!!!
     
  9. Sirenz

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    thanks guys there is an updated version on my soundcloud if you want a peak and also a new demo thing im working on :D