First produced Jungle Track...... so need some advice and comments !!!

[Rouky]

Hello everyone,

I need some advice for my first old school jungle tune done with fruity loops. I'm still learning tricks with this program so every comment is good to take !!
Do you find it good ? transitions ? instruments ? intro, outro and main bass ?

I wanted it to sounds like coooool and smooth jungle...

Thanx and take care !

https://soundcloud.com/mathieu-rouky/facing-the-pier

 

[Verva]

Not bad but i wouldnt have that pad constantly doing that melody, especially with how long the attack is. Id not have as many note changes but still have the pad changing. Keep it up mate.

Future reference put in new track reviews.