Im not an expert on liquid as ive only just started making it myself, seems chilled enough. and im only listening on headphones. The bell/cchimey sound is good but seems to be dominant over the beat, which sèems very quiet. Id also say that as for any music there needs to be variation. It would pretty much go on like that for 5 or 6 minutes and never changing. Beat never changes nor does the notes. Good first attempt though
Pretty good for a first attempt imo. Some advice I would give is never to upload a track that you are not happy with yourself (that means something is wrong). Having said that I think we all see flaws in our previous creations but if you can't satisfy yourself it's the best you can do then maybe no one else will go for it either
Like the chimes allot, some work to do on drums for sure but for a first attempt I think you have some basics down.