First go at producing dubstep...

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Olllie, Mar 31, 2009.

  1. Olllie

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    that was.....hmmm.....interesting? lol i dont think i can pass judgment on this he he its definetly not my style of dubstep.
    Production wise, you got alot of ideas crammed in there, overal it sounds quite cheap***** tbh, like the standard presets u get in fruity or summin. The riff is quite a good idea an the arrangement of the drums are good. Just the overall sound isn't full enough, layering is what your missing, and careful e'qin etc good ideas tho man, an for your first attempt well done! :2thumbs:


    ****Like a midi off a LG ringtone, i swear ive heard this before lol
     
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  3. MARKLAR

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    sounds kinda like a porno groove!
    bass line sounds cool but maybe u shud change the synth
    id get rid of the toms or watever they are the sound kinda cheesy.
    like the trumpets or watever they are but sumtimes theres kinda to many goin on.
    not a bad first effort man keep it up!

    check out my new dubstep tune if ya can!
    http://dnbforum.com/showthread.php?t=69387
    cheers
     
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    m4a file? cant open it.
     
  5. Olllie

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    Haha wasn't expecting any serious feedback but thanks anyway and sorry for pulling your leg. I made this on the shitter using the Sony Ericsson "MusicDJ".

    Was quite proud of it anyway. Maybe I should take a step up to fruityloops!
     
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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    yea iwas wonderin why it said phonestep.lol
    an i dont like bein harsh wen givin feedback cos u could of put a load of effort in an shit!lol
     
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  8. iMation

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    Lol not bad for phone creation i guess