First ever production - Dubstep (unfinished)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by haiku, Jun 18, 2009.

  1. haiku

    haiku Member

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    Use FL haha just wondering what people think, as I said it's the first thing really that I've made so obviously it's not gonna be brilliant. Any advice/critique would be great :)

    Oh also, it's only the intro :rolleyes:

    http://www.dnbshare.com/download/dubstep1_2.mp3.html
     
  2. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    theres not really much there to give feedback on tbh.
    u shud do a little more like a beat or sumfin.
    but the synth near the end sounds quite nice
     
  3. haiku

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    Yeah, got a long way to go but thanks :)
     
  4. safety

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    look at some tutorials on youtube on how to put a dubstep drum loop together or listen to a track you like and try and copy that loop, it might seem like cheating, but you'll learn a lot form doing i that way. like sc said, it gets dirty at the end, so you've got something to work with.
     
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    That's a good idea, I'll give it a go (y) thanks
     
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    I liked it, had a good build up and like everyone said, with that synth at the end it has the potential to sound proper dutt.

    :2thumbs:
     
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    eXyZe !ONGELEGEN!

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    This! Go up on youtube, there are plenty of tuts about dubstep. U gotta get the beat down. The bit u got could work like an intro before the drop tho. Good luck.