First dubstep tune : Dying sound

[Kibon]

This is my verry first dubstep tune, I've been trying some other stuff out lately in stead of jungle..

http://soundcloud.com/sensimo/sensimo-dying-sound

Tell me what you think !

Thanks in advance

 

[Kibon]

bump

 

[Neural Tech]

Whoa... this is huge right from the start... Vocal is badass... this is epic sounding, sounds like it'd work well to start a set with.

Bass is ok, nice and ruthless, but too loud (turn down a couple DB imo), the "dying" piano sound isn't working for me.

I wish the SD was more upfront, the KD sounds good, the hats could also pierce through a bit better I think.


Overall = it's an ugly sounding track and I like it for that, but I feel it could be way more polished.

 

[Kibon]

Thanks man ! I was really waiting for a comment on this track because I want to get it officially finished as fast as possible , but I can't do that without some tips and critics..

 

[krease]

intro is good, not keen on the vocal sample, the drop needs to have a bigger impact, needs more sub, and i think the bassline is too loud and doesnt sound that polished.

 

[Kibon]

Thanks for the feedback !

 

[Neural Tech]

Have you gone back over the mixdown or is this finished?

 

[richie_stix]

liked the intro very much... but that hoover/fart sound din't do it for me?