First Drum'n'Bass Track (advices are more than welcome)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Bolt, Nov 15, 2010.

  1. Bolt

    Bolt New Member

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    Hi everyone,

    I already apologize if my english isn't perfect, i'm from Switzerland. I just wanted to share this track in order to know what you guys think about it and how I could improve my future tracks.

    http://soundcloud.com/boltinthevoid/light-therapy

    Hope you'll enjoy it!

    Bolt
     
  2. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    it's clipping at 2:54 and on check that mate! :)

    If the first 3 mins were the intro then good! if these first 3 mins were some kind part of the tune, were madly ones, interesting and so on.

    But defo, you'll be one day a dancefloor killah if you keep like that for sure! =)