first dnb tune!

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  1. charliemcp

    charliemcp i start fires

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    tunes called "bitch", got a speech in it that u may like ;)

    anyways yeah this is my first attempt at producing dnb so let me no wot u all think! cheers!
     
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    Nutek movement junglist

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    Loving the bass mate, and the sample is sick, but i was itching for some better drums in that, it would make up the track, needs some more shakers, hi-hats etc.
     
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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cool tune mate bass is cool cud do wit a bit of work tho
    drums are a bit weak could do wit a bit more thump
    cool sample too!
    overall good tune for ur first 1!

    please check out my dnb
    http://www.myspace.com/djscuk
     
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    charliemcp i start fires

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    safe for the words ppl yeah i will beef up the drums and see wot i can do with the bass :2thumbs:
     
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    Looking forward to it (y)
     
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    charliemcp i start fires

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    just to let u no i spent the last few hours makin some major changes to my tune, takin in wot u said and adding some ideas of my own, hav a butch if u like! cheers :D

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    Cool sample use !
    that main mid bass sound is nice, your kick and snare need way morew punch and presence but considering this is your 1st dnb tune it's pretty tight.
    the main bass sound is cloudy as fuck and needs cleaned up alot, drums could dow ith edits and more fx would be good.

    really good effort mate
     
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    charliemcp i start fires

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    cheers for the advice bruv! much appreciated :2thumbs:
     
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    charliemcp i start fires

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    cheers m8, fl studio 7, ive neva dun music tech or anyfin like that so theres a lot of shit i dnt get on it
     
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    Pretty sick for a first tune, better than anything I could make and I've been through two music tech courses...

    The drums need some work to give them a bit more presence, which is what I'm learning to do at the moment.
     
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    charliemcp i start fires

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    cheers m8! yea i well regret not doin music tek at college woulda helped a lot
     
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    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

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    some of the best never did that shit! good tune mate! needs work, but good
     
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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    i never did music tek or nuffin!
    probly will tho!
     
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    charliemcp i start fires

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    rele didnt realise that! thought it was pretty much essential, yeah cheers for the words wen i get anuva moment i will work on it....safe!!