DnB First D'n'B track

[RafZ]

Hey Guys,
I've been playing with electro and dance for a while but I wanted to do a D'n'B track. Here's my first track. I'm ready for the pounding (aka criticism).
my.vube.com/Funky+Channel/NLKc0g92L3?t=s&u=Wf3iWz0YGl&ts=1367042012

 

[msmith222]

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[MisterApe]

I feel like the structure is the biggest problem here, how's that in the full version of this?

 

[RafZ]

Thanks guys! MisterApe, no full version yet.
msmith222 you need to relax haha

 

[RafZ]

Hey! I fixed it a little and added some images for your viewing pleasure. The track is getting a lot of hits so I'm hoping you like it

 

[tarantula2013]

What you want stay singer is good thing, really. But this is a more aggrissive music in most cases and just try to watch man in white t-shirt

On my taste dnb toaster is more energy.

 

[RafZ]

Awesome clip! I live in Canada but UK d'n'b scene is definitely my favorite