First DnB Track

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by djnarkus, Jan 14, 2011.

  1. djnarkus

    djnarkus New Member

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    Ive been producing dubstep and hip hop since i was 12.I am now 14 and attempting to make Drum and bass. Let me Know what you Think!!! (It skips the intro)
     
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    CH3SH CH3SH - Naphalm Audio

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    Yeah liking that bass that hammers in on the drop,
    Your drums could easily do with another layer or 2
    Maybe layer up a kick and snare and some pitch shifted crashes/hats etc
    Otherwise theres some nice ideas
    Wouldnt be my first choice though lol ;)
     
  3. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Yeahh pretty cool, but it sounds more like Breakbeat to me, Drum & Bass normally is a little faster these days.
     
  4. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    for a first effort specially from someone as young as you its not bad. its not very good if i am to judge it on artistic merit (means like how much i rate the tune, all your personal info aside). but just keep at it, develop your style and graft your tunes big time, and im sure youll write something epic one day
     
  5. Forau

    Forau CONCUSSION RECS

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    Definately more of a breakbeat feel to this. Still nice though.
    Only thing id suggest is varying things up a bit more.