Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MX FRTNA, Jun 14, 2011.
what do you think of the first dnb production i did 2gether with a friend...
For a first attempt its not bad!, it does sound a bit too happy and cheerfull for me though. the drums I personally am not a fan of just because of the arrangement, mess around with where you placed the kick and snare (if that makes sense) and the intro is a little bit long cut it to around 1:10 or 1:30!
(oh yeah and add a break in there under your drums get a nice little shuffle going get things rolling!)
okay i will keep in mind by making the next track but thank you
Anytime man sorry if I came across a bit harsh!, you got the right idea keep at it!
wasn´t harsh good feedback thanks a lot
sounds pretty nice, the only thing missing is maybe some crashes or ambience in the background. and try a few different rythms with the highhats with some accents.
okay nice thank you i will all of this keep in mind
For first attempt mate not bad but needs work, im not really feeling the drums maybe cut up a loop to roll behind yours, plus i think fragments is rite sounds to happy! imo if you made your bassline dirty and louder it would balance the mood abit more. Good work mate
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