first dnb track // PLS FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MX FRTNA, Jun 14, 2011.

  1. MX FRTNA

    MX FRTNA New Member

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    hey hey
    what do you think of the first dnb production i did 2gether with a friend...

     
  2. Fragments

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    For a first attempt its not bad!, it does sound a bit too happy and cheerfull for me though. the drums I personally am not a fan of just because of the arrangement, mess around with where you placed the kick and snare (if that makes sense) and the intro is a little bit long cut it to around 1:10 or 1:30!

    (oh yeah and add a break in there under your drums get a nice little shuffle going get things rolling!)
     
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    okay i will keep in mind by making the next track :) but thank you :)
     
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    Anytime man sorry if I came across a bit harsh!, you got the right idea keep at it!
     
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    wasn´t harsh :) good feedback :) thanks a lot :)
     
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    sounds pretty nice, the only thing missing is maybe some crashes or ambience in the background. and try a few different rythms with the highhats with some accents.
     
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    okay nice thank you i will all of this keep in mind :)
     
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    For first attempt mate not bad but needs work, im not really feeling the drums maybe cut up a loop to roll behind yours, plus i think fragments is rite sounds to happy! imo if you made your bassline dirty and louder it would balance the mood abit more. Good work mate :)
     
  9. MX FRTNA

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