First DNB demo

Discussion in 'Production' started by NeuroShokk, Feb 25, 2010.

  1. NeuroShokk

    NeuroShokk New Member

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    Hi ladies!

    Here is short demo by me and my friend, we never did DNB before but we kinda like to listen
    to is sometimes. So we were curious how would it sound when done by us, we hoped if u could
    throw a few critics, would be welcome!

    http://www.sendspace.com/file/tdz0ax

    Btw. it was entirely done in Reason 4.0

    Thx!
     
  2. Indigo

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    right im going to listen to this , but next time if you want people to listen to it soundcloud it because no one can be bothered downloading
     
  3. Indigo

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    reminds me of john b , is that an arped lead?

    the bass sounds like a piece of paper next to a sub and its flapping about - beef it up

    nice wooshes and everything is very clear

    the break sounds like a 4 beat loop though , whats going on there man?

    add some 64s and change some stuff up

    it sounds very tame and anti experimental work on variation and use a different break because if i had to listen to that for 6 mins , i wouldn't be happy.

    overall your track has potential!

    and its nice a clear which i love good job on that , but yeah thats all
     
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    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    i like it! only i think you should revise the structure, the drop has no impact cos you gave it all away in the beginning. or add harder stuff on the drop
     
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    H*product Heavyweight product

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    :)
     
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    Poo Sandwich .. it tastes like shit.

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