Drum & Bass First attempt

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Fatkidscantjump, Jun 4, 2012.

  1. Fatkidscantjump

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    Hi there,

    So I'm a total noob in production, I mean since a long time I'm making fun with Garageband but nothing to do with real production.
    I tried Logic and as a dnb fan i came out with that first attempt.

    First I was pretty happy of it, and then I went here and listend to some tracks you guys have been posting and I was like "Owww... I sound like shit" lol.

    So here it is, please if u think its shit, say it but say why its shit and why should i try to improve and work on, thanks a lot, any advices is really appreciated.

    Thanks you for your time.

    http://soundcloud.com/eargasm-1/5th-ave