First attempt at writing some rolling DnB

[Djashleyp]

Easy chaps!

came up with this today, any feedback would be greatly appreciated

http://soundcloud.com/komatose/untitled_roller

Cheers

 

[miszt]

nice sounds and drums, its not really rolling to my ears, need to get those filters working more i think, but its kinda hard to tell whats going on coz your precussion is taking up most of the mix

 

[paracyte]

Ez,
Drums are bit static, needs more variation
especially in hi hats, you can hear emptiness.
Mix is muffled.
More variation in synth lines
at the moment its a bit boring tbh.
Cheers.

 

[Rajstah Vibe]

need more phatness, need to b more tight... roll with hi-hat more up on the mix, some more shuffling between the kick and the snare with a different short snare at lower volume, or rimshots... that's the tricks!

 

[TarekFM]

Needs work as already stated, however, off to a good start..liking the bassline melody(so to speak)

 

[fractal]

love the background melody and youve got some real nice deep bass sounds. like others have said the drums need a bit more movement - some ghost hits to give it more of a flow but songs sounding nice man keep at it.