First attempt at writing some rolling DnB

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Djashleyp, Mar 14, 2011.

  1. Djashleyp

    Djashleyp DJKomatose

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    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    nice sounds and drums, its not really rolling to my ears, need to get those filters working more i think, but its kinda hard to tell whats going on coz your precussion is taking up most of the mix
     
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    Drums are bit static, needs more variation
    especially in hi hats, you can hear emptiness.
    Mix is muffled.
    More variation in synth lines
    at the moment its a bit boring tbh.
    Cheers.
     
  4. Rajstah Vibe

    Rajstah Vibe soundcloud.com/rajstah

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    need more phatness, need to b more tight... roll with hi-hat more up on the mix, some more shuffling between the kick and the snare with a different short snare at lower volume, or rimshots... that's the tricks! ;)
     
  5. TarekFM

    TarekFM Producer

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    Needs work as already stated, however, off to a good start..liking the bassline melody(so to speak):)
     
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    love the background melody and youve got some real nice deep bass sounds. like others have said the drums need a bit more movement - some ghost hits to give it more of a flow but songs sounding nice man keep at it.