DnB FireWire - Flux [Feedback appreciated]

[FireWire Music]

Hello everyone, this is my first official dnb track. All thoughts welcomed.

https://soundcloud.com/firewiremusic%2Fdrumbass-firewire-flux

 

[Mentor & Moore]

Hey man! It's quit nice for a for dnb track! love the wobble bass in the drop! There are many good melodies in it also! but maybe you could try to add another one in the first verse to give it some more variety or some vocal/vocal chops can do the job also
Great work keep it up!

 

[FireWire Music]

Hey man! It's quit nice for a for dnb track! love the wobble bass in the drop! There are many good melodies in it also! but maybe you could try to add another one in the first verse to give it some more variety or some vocal/vocal chops can do the job also
Great work keep it up!

Thanks man, and soundcloud ruined the quality a bit which kinda sucks New tracks will be out hopefully soon

 

[Focal Shift]

this has some nice sounds, good vibe i think the drop could do with more impact, it sort of just is there instead of a moment being created

 

[Polymer]

I like how light and deep it is (does that make sense?). It's nice and warm. My only suggestion is maybe introducing a second theme?