Well to get back on track. Youve posted here so we may aswell feedback.
Ok, I think the riser synth you had leading up in the intro was a little weird, maybe change that to a wind type of sound. Kick seemed a little low in the frequency range, personally thought a kick with more crunch wouldve sounded better for this track. Nice when it drops, but your sub is sitting too high an octave, maybe drop it down an octave or two. Nice padwork. And Damn! 8 and a half minutes! Pretty long dude! Got good drum work on the build to the drops.