[FINISHED TUNE] Ashley P Ft Emily Grace - Rearranged FEEDBACK PLEASE

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  1. Djashleyp

    Djashleyp DJKomatose

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  2. Lucidproduction

    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    ur lucky as being able to record guitar and vocals... i have no chance of that.

    its a pretty good tune the drums could be a little bit better but its still a gd tune
     
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    Djashleyp DJKomatose

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    didn't record any guitar mate, just vocals......

    guitar is midi sequenced
     
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    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    i thought it was but the page says guitar and vocals by so and so !!

    that is good synth guitar.
     
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    Djashleyp DJKomatose

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    yeah she wrote the guitar chords and i just inputted them in
     
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    Djashleyp DJKomatose

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    heard the tune be4 without the vocals, and i can say that they did improve the overall. Nice original tune.
     
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    lazyj Indecent Exposure Ind-Ex

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    Guitar sounds real!! how tha f*** did you do that with midi! lol!
    I dont think ive heard anything like this ever! and i like it!
    I think it needs more drum and bass type ideas into it thou! but great vocal and well put together! Keep It Coming!
     
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    yeah, just listened right through - a good sign ;)

    sounding sweet. imho the vocal needs a bit more processing, especially some eq to fit better in the mix. add some slight fx maybe, mainly to emphasize the drops , and maybe tweak the drums a lil bit more, in contrast to the guitar they seem to be to stable.

    likin it tho. do some more! :D
     
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    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    what a beautiful tune
     
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    Djashleyp DJKomatose

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    YEAH BIG UP TO EVERYONE WHO COMMENTED...

    been away from the internet for a while........
    this tune has now been updated and finished!!!!

    www.soundcloud.com/komatose
     
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