Finished liquid tune

[Rahrah]

https://soundcloud.com/taylor_b11%2Fthinkin-clip-final

just a clip.

tell me what you think people.. first tune ive bothered to actually finish, been producing for about 2-3 months

advice definantly needed. thanks

 

[BeSexy]

add some more effects and other high atmospheric sounds, maybe a bell bouncing along here and there

 

[Rahrah]

alright mate thanks

 

[armelqb]

Like Besexy said, add more effects and variation into the track, it gets a bit boring hearing the same loop. The lowpass for the drums in the "buildup" needs to be work on, they were distorting a bit. Congrats on finishing your track tho, my suggestion is to finish any track no matter how shit it could be, just building the habit of finishing it helps later on.

 

[Metik2009]

The general feel of the track is really good, especially if you've only been doing it for a couple months. On the drop you might want to add some modulation to your bassline, or use the bassline you have as a sub-bass and add another bass on top of it (like a mid bass, with the lower frequencies EQd out) and bring that in 4-8 bars after the drop. Also it might help to add a drum break at the end of every 8 bars or so, it'll give some more progression to it. It sounds great though, really interested to see what else you come up with!

 

[Rahrah]

thanks for the advice... will definantly start finishing more tracks as ive felt alot more knowledges been gained when ive been finishing them

 

[IV4]

I wish I was that good after two or three months.
Anyway, I would say the most important thing your track is lacking are little fx sounds. Just little things that give the song some spice.

 

[Rahrah]

thanks again for the advice, here is another tune from myself incase any of u are curious to see how my productions are going

https://soundcloud.com/taylor_b11%2Fdispatch-clip