your ideas, particularly regarding the vocal cuts, are really pleasant to listen to! you've definitely got an ear for the melodic side of things. i'd definitely suggest you look into some more authentic sounding drum samples. liquid dnb, with this sort of style in particular, tends to thrive a bit more when it has some natrual elements to the drums, i.e a more 'realistic' kick and snare sample. sounds like you already got the jist with breakbeats on Moving but yeah they are always helpful with realism too. also important is that the drums are at the very forefront in the mix, as it is dnb of course! all in all though some good work here, keep at it.