Finally. A tune. Need serious criticizing (!) feedback before mastering. [NEUROHOP]

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  1. Nucleoid

    Nucleoid Nucleoid Drum & Bass

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    So here's a little clip of my Qo - Control Room remix entry. I can't be uploading the full I think, because the contest doesn't allow me so..
    I need all the negative things you can think of. Anything can help, honestly all negativity, come on and bring it!
    I want to make this perfect and thus work out all the flaws, I still have a few weeks to finish it.
    Any comments on EQ/compression are more than welcome, I haven't EQ'ed a lot yet, just spend some 40 minutes on the mixdown, but that's all I guess..




    Thanks in advance.
     
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    Re: Finally. A tune. Need serious criticizing (!) feedback before mastering. [NEUROHO

    Says its not available mate? Did you take it down?
     
  3. Nucleoid

    Nucleoid Nucleoid Drum & Bass

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    Re: Finally. A tune. Need serious criticizing (!) feedback before mastering. [NEUROHO

    Damn, no, but it's on private. I embedded the private link, thinking that would work.. but I might've been wrong :( I don't want it on public yet.. I'll upload it on some other soundcloud account for the time being. Expect it here in about 10 min..
     
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    Nucleoid Nucleoid Drum & Bass

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    Re: Finally. A tune. Need serious criticizing (!) feedback before mastering. [NEUROHO

    Bump for some feedback :(
     
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    Re: Finally. A tune. Need serious criticizing (!) feedback before mastering. [NEUROHO

    the snare needs to be heavier imo, try layering more snares
     
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    Re: Finally. A tune. Need serious criticizing (!) feedback before mastering. [NEUROHO

    Not my favourite of yours, i think its the tempo, i personally don't think these kind of reece bass's work as well at this kind of speed. Just my opinion though. saaaafe
     
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    Re: Finally. A tune. Need serious criticizing (!) feedback before mastering. [NEUROHO

    Not bad, but i also think that it would sound better at faster bpm with 2step pattern maybe
     
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    Re: Finally. A tune. Need serious criticizing (!) feedback before mastering. [NEUROHO

    Snare should be more in the front if you get me, try to put some other punchy mid-range snare on it, just to bring the energy in.
     
  9. Nucleoid

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    Re: Finally. A tune. Need serious criticizing (!) feedback before mastering. [NEUROHO

    I'll start EQing a bit and maybe some sidechaining, but I think the samples in the snare are fine. I hear different things about it a lot. One says it's perfect the other says it's too soft, other says it's too loud. I guess I gotta find a sortof inbetween through EQing and compressing a bit. But I'll definitely get working on the snare!

    Thanks for the feedback so far guys, appreciate it :)