Feeling creative, I showcase- please comment.

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Here are my newest practice dnb tracks. Anyone care to give me feedback, either conceptual or technical, I will take all notes on board, as I will be finalizing these soon (if there is something here to work with.) Thanks.

vox3
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B_wIV9EDDlx4U2FTcVpqRnVTM1k
OGT
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B_wIV9EDDlx4YmRXdWo2Mk1PODg

 

[Keigo]

OGT is really nice track I think! dark and minimal. nice atmospheres too

just thought structure is slightly abstract. maybe it could go into breakdown from 1:41, buildup for 16 or 32 bars, then go into main drop.
anyway though, it is nice track!

 

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Thank you for the feedback on structure. When i remix later this week I will look into this suggestion and most likely will take it on board. Always looking for tips on arranging my tunes- personally feel this is a weakness (bigtime) within my works.

 

[maschinistom]

Will listen later on when back ... it's a national holiday here today...

 

[maschinistom]

Love vox3! Very deep and dark, but smooth and not hectic. Interesting drum work as well. Master sounds a bit distorted on my side, could be my speakers. The sub is phenomenal though!

 

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Machin, as in distorted, do you mean it is clipping? Or do you mean that I have used too much distortion on my sounds? There is no limiter on the master on this, should I put one on? I am a sophomore in regards to limiting/compression on the master, etc. Thanks for the feedback also!

 

[maschinistom]

Machin, as in distorted, do you mean it is clipping? Or do you mean that I have used too much distortion on my sounds? There is no limiter on the master on this, should I put one on? I am a sophomore in regards to limiting/compression on the master, etc. Thanks for the feedback also!

Yap, a limiter on the master could solve the issue I assume.

 

[PeriodicDisturbance]

gracias amigo!