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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by kuthoerrr89, Nov 6, 2010.

  1. kuthoerrr89

    kuthoerrr89 Member

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    Hi guys,

    So i'm working on my first dnb track and i want to know if these 20 seconds i made have potential.
    Obviously it's not mastered. I did mix it as far as i can. No clipping whatsoever.

    So please tell me your thoughts about it, what do you like and what don't you like etc :)



    Cheers
     
  2. DOOVD

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    i like it
     
  3. Busdriver

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    Welcome mate, try to post your tunes on the new talent&track reviews section or you will be hanged up.
    :p
     
  4. adi19

    adi19 Sex Drugs and drumn bass!

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    This is actually pretty good^^ maybe make an Intro that is less energetic and than a riser that less to the beginning of this part baseline is pretty cool :D and the drums need more energy and maybe use a punchier snare
     
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  5. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Welcome, sounds pretty good for a first track.
    Work on the snare, it's too much in the back.
     
  6. kuthoerrr89

    kuthoerrr89 Member

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    Re: feedback

    Thanks, i do know what you mean with the drums to more energetic but i dont know how exactly, are there any tricks or tips that i could use? Cheers!
     
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  7. adi19

    adi19 Sex Drugs and drumn bass!

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    Use better samples :D just listen to every sample you have got and use the best one then eq them(many tutorials on youtube and google) use a good mastering plugin on the drums :D
     
  8. kuthoerrr89

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    Re: feedback

    Can you recommend me a good master plugin? i work in FL! I kinda like my snare, it consists of 4 snares that i layered and individually EQed.
     
  9. dar kist

    dar kist KYRO

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    wrong section dude
     
  10. adi19

    adi19 Sex Drugs and drumn bass!

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    Try Izotope ozone 4 thats the plugin we use with our Band its just awesome but quite exepensive it comes with many different presets and makes your song sounds much better^^
     
  11. Phat_Sam

    Phat_Sam Well-Known Member

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    Wrong sections. Right ideas ;)

    Work on the snare. and general mixdown. Keep practising!
     
  12. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Re: feedback

    Repeat after me, I am a bot, I am a bot, I am a bottom.
     
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    threads merged and moved to correct forum.
     
  14. Fishy:)

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    Not bad for a first track man:)
     
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