feedback

[blunt master]

hey everyone, im new to producing and this is my first beat that I've made in logic. I was hoping you guys could give me some feedback, let me know if it sucks or what I'm doing wrong/right. thanks
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kcq5gC7oeyk

 

[blunt master]

shit could a mod or someone move this to the trackreviews forum, i just realized i posted in the wrong place