Feedback would be appreciated, first track that is sounding alright to me

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by yogi23, Jul 31, 2011.

  1. yogi23

    yogi23 Member

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    Hey guys, its something i've been working on the past couple of days, i've been producing for about 5 months now and i'm going through that phase of not been able to finish tracks

    i thought asking for some feedback could be a big help.

    also the mixing could be dodgy since i only had access to headphones




    cheers!
     
  2. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    What is that bassline in 12/8? Interesting :)

    I like it, the levels sounded ok to me. There's room for some lead/fx sounds to come in somewhere I guess. And maybe a bit more mid range on the bass every now and then like in the intro. Nice sound tho.
     
  3. yogi23

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    haha probably i dont read music, all i know is it goes A#0, A#1 then G#0. is that a bad thing?

    cheers man
     
  4. LEX86

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    love that simple feel man but think maybe the bass could shine through a little more but besides that the rolling feeling i get when listening is what u want.. good job
     
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    thanks mate
     
  6. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    I can sleep to this, in a good way =) so chill!
     
  7. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Possibly a little more top end to your bass.