Feedback - why it does not groove?

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by canabispar, Jan 17, 2016.

  1. canabispar

    canabispar New Member

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    Hello everybody!
    I created this loop, and at first I really liked it. But the longer I worked with it, the more I began to feel that there is no groove.
    I can not understand is the rhythmic errors, or sounds are not suited to each other, or something else?
    Also any other feedback is very desirable, especially in terms of the arrangement / structure. I still can not nail this puzzle :\
    https://clyp.it/enmrzzph
     
  2. Palindrome

    Palindrome New Member

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    Hi, could you post this in soundcloud? I've opened to many links before to disaster