Feedback wanted for new tune "TheForgotten"

[Amalgam]

Hi all, been wanting to be more active on this forum but my confirmation email still hasn't come in...
In the meantime, here's a new tune by me. Check it
https://soundcloud.com/user-660145120%2Ftheforgottenclip

 

[EvezDroppin]

nice tune, if I were you i'd bring the bass out a bit more at times, have it evolving as the tune goes on. Other than that I like what you've done so far and have no real criticism,.

 

[Such Music Records]

Cool vibe, well put together. I think the Sub need to be Turned up a bit..thats pretty much all i can say
Good stuff

 

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Very nice ambience here. The lead moves nicely and creates a flow. Agree that the sub can possibly be turned up (I think).

 

[Amalgam]

Thanks all for checking it! That seems to be the common critique of my tunes, to turn up the sub. Hard to monitor on my setup in my space. Looks like I'll just have to remember to add a touch more when I think it's enough.