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[jwongonline]

wassup guys
im new to producing dnb but i thought i'd try and remix "miike snow - silvia"

im not 100% happy with it but couldnt perfect it so i thought i'd upload it and get some feedback.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NdEDEPXhVjA

safe

 

[Manu Forti]

not my style but my GF loved it :]

 

[Stiffer]

i love miike snow, proper quality

the kick seems weak and the snnare is a bit splashy if you know what i mean.. not a bad remix though!!
could do with more variation as the break just seems to follow the same pattern throughout!!!
maybe change the bell type sound to a different synth every now and then too, its just a tad boring thats all

keep at it

 

[logikz]

yeah i agree with stiffer, needs more variation, but other than that its a cracking tune

 

[jwongonline]

cheers for the feedback guys, i prety much agree with you.
Even to me the song starts to get a bit boring as though it def needs a switch up/progression or some variation!