Feedback plox!

[ChestOr]

So, heres my new track...

http://soundcloud.com/minor-u/untitled

even though its unfinished i still would like to get some Feedback on this.
Just to maybe get some new ideas on finishing it.

 

[generaldissaray]

cool tune i like the sound at 30 seconds. could do with a vocal line

 

[ChestOr]

did some work on the Arrangement...you can listen to it on Myspace, its still not finished, but i think its a little better now.

http://www.myspace.com/minorubeats

 

[subprime]

I like the direction you're taking. Musical music has to be good. Good luck getting it done, sounds good so far.

 

[ChestOr]

thx,

Ok, I've uploaded the Final Version on Myspace (got some heavy Problems with my internet Connection and uploading a Mp3 takes one hour of my time)

Check out the Myspace-Link above.

Aight...that Link is better

http://soundcloud.com/minor-u/fairytales-gone-bad

 

[ChestOr]

no one wants to give me Feedback on the Full Version?