Feedback please!

[IndustrialDream]

Was working on this tune for a while and decided to finish it up!

Any feedback would be appreciated

It's called Cyberpunks

http://www.myspace.com/shadowmanrealm

 

[Neomind]

i don't like the reverb in the wobble... makes it sound weird.
Also the snare is not too rich in high frequencies (splashy typical sound in nowadays jump up, but hey!, experiment!)
i think you could fill this with some more hi hats (shifted to one side a bit), and make it a more groovy tune

 

[IndustrialDream]

Thanks man, yeah I was not too sure on the filters I had on the wobble I'll give it a mess around!

 

[dauntless]

Yeah, I agree. the snare does sound a touch loud. I can't tell the bass on these crappy Imac speakers. The turnaround switch up break is a little low in volume other wise not a bad little bit of music. Hope that helps.
dauntless