Feedback Please

[5IVE7EVEN9INE]

Just started making some tunes last month, been trying to get some feedback...

http://soundcloud.com/579/metro-days

http://soundcloud.com/579/hidden

Thanks and Cheers.

 

[b3wbs]

Metro Days is pretty boring. Even though it is Dubstep you still need to have some kind of harmonic integrity. You just had the one note repeating in the bass and what seemed like just random hits of a piano? I found it quite hard to listen to.

Hidden was a little better, but not much. It still did nothing and stayed at one level of intensity but I suppose at least the bass played more than one note..

 

[5IVE7EVEN9INE]

alright thanks for the feedback..

 

[VerbumSapiens]

Metro Days:

I found it quite hard to listen to.

True,it sounds a bit...random.
Hidden:
That is does NOT sound like rain.It's some disturbing sort of...white noise that makes the track...unlistenable.The drums sound pretty nice,tho'...