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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by mcsketcha, Apr 19, 2011.

  1. mcsketcha

    mcsketcha Sketchamus

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    After some helpful constructive critisism on my track ive gone back and edited it. Ive added some reverb to the vocals and lowered the volume of them slightly, and changed one of the words that I pronounced incorrectly. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.



    I've also added the acapella to my soundcloud, so if anyone wants to do a remix then hit me up and il send you a download link for the acapella;

     
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  2. mcsketcha

    mcsketcha Sketchamus

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    Forau CONCUSSION RECS

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    Not my kinda thing but i can appreciate good music :).
     
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    Cheers man, thanks for checking the track out and for the feedback.
     
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    i'd turn up the vocals a bit, your vocals should the focus with the backing track, which is pretty cool, nice work
     
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    ThePapa Suffragette City..

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    Sounds good man. Sorely tempted to mix the accapella into dnb if it's available Sketcha?
     
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    Thanks mate. I previously had the vocals too loud, and I think this time ive got them too quiet, Im still a complete noob when it comes to mastering a track etc. The beat is produced by ProBangers.com, I added the Dante's Inferno samples in for the intro. Thanks for listening to the track and for the feedback, safe.

    Cheers Jaro. Yeah wicked mate, id love to hear it dropped in one of your mixes, il get the acapella download set up on my soundcloud in a min, sound.

    ---------- Post added at 21:38 ---------- Previous post was at 21:29 ----------

    The acapella is now available for download from my soundcloud.
     
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  8. Ray Sparra

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    Not to crazy about your tune , but i heard some mad beats going around in my head to your Accapella,
    There's a mad Dnb tune in there somewhere.

    Nice rhyming btw
     
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    Cheers man, yeah im thinking of asking one of my mates to make a dnb remix of it using the acapella. I'd love to hear someone transform it into a dnb or dubstep track. Thanks for listening to it and for the feedback.
     
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    will check soon man .. speakers are being wank at the mo
     
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    nice flow man
     
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    Cheers man.

    Thanks man. Cheers for checking out the track and for the feedback.