feedback on two tracks: "Afraid" and "Nightcrawler"

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by joka89, Aug 2, 2012.

  1. joka89

    joka89 Member

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    yo guys, been workin on a couple of tracks the past few weeks and would appreciate some feedback on what ive done so far...running out of ideas to would be useful lol. safeeeeeeee

    [video]http://soundcloud.com/joka89/afraid[/video]

    [video]http://soundcloud.com/joka89/nightcrawler[/video]
     
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  2. Busdriver

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    Hey mate,

    Nice stuff, you could maybe try to bring the bass/synths up a little bit.
    Very nice drm loop on nightcrawler!
     
  3. joka89

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    safe man yh still got tweaks to make to the synths and add more shit! safe for the feedback!
     
  4. nusphere

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    Both sound pretty cool to me! I think you need to go ahead and create more of a finished composition for both and I recon the ideas will flow as you interact with the various elements