like the initial instrumental. nice flow to it. Good drums. Some shakers would sound good. Maybe some hiss sounds or rattlesnake type noises. Got a mexican type feel to it.
Pretty good tho mate.
sorry cant be much more help.
needs filling out tho, layer that kick drum with a nice midrange one so it pokes thru the mix and hits you in the chest dude, also layer that nice bass you have with a reall sub , then you could and some fx maybe some wishy woshy sounds sweeping in and out, after that i think you have a brilliant tune, i really like it man, send me it when its done