feedback on my new style jump up track?

[Murko]

https://soundcloud.com/murkodnb%2Fdimensional-clip

hey worked on this for a few weeks wondered if i could get some helpful feedback, what went well? what could be improved? thanks!

 

[BattleteK]

Your snare definitely needs work, it sounds weird with that reverb whoosh, also try and make the snare Mono. Furthermore, try some more bass switch-ups in the track

 

[Murko]

cheers mate