Feedback on my new Caspa remix for the comp please! (FriskyNippa Dark Dnb Remix)

[FriskyNippa]

https://soundcloud.com/friskynippa/caspa-rmx/s-wSOF6

Nearly finished this one, has anyone got any constructive critisism they wanna share on how i can improve it?
Also let me know what you think of the second footwork drop!


Cheers

 

[Solace]

nice work! That second drop is awesome!
One thing I noticed: is that cymbal panned to the right? after a while my right ear was quite irritated by it :p
Another thing is that I think the first drop feels slow.. I'm not really sure why, but i feel it should have a more rolling feel

 

[FriskyNippa]

Thanks for the feedback man! Funnily enough the cymbal was the thing that was winding me up the most! ive taken it out and now have a finished version which im happy with!
https://soundcloud.com/friskynippa/caspa-mad-man-feat-riko-friskynippa-remix

What do you think?

 

[Solace]

haha who am I to say what cymbals you can add and can't :p I'm just giving my honest opinion
Sounding nice from what I can tell! I think it's a bit better without the cymbal
Still loving that second drop... Good luck in the competition