Feedback on jump-up track

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Hi guys

I'm pretty new to the jump-up subgenre. I bought a new softsynth and played around with new sounds for jump-up tracks.

I could really use some feedback at this point.

I tried really hard to make a good intro but I failed terribly at it, any tips to create better intros would be nice.

I'm happy with the drop but it could use some inprovements I think

Also the vocal sample I couldn't fit correctly in the mix, tips on vocals would be cool too.

I applied some basic crappy mastering myself

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated

cheers