Yeah pretty cool reminds me of some older john B stuff but with that in mind i was thinking yeah some trancey electro feel going on in the intro i hope this gets really ruff on the drop and it doesnt pull that off, fair play mabye thats not what your going for but i think that a rolling bassline distorted would make this so much better.
the piano also seems a bit loud...
just incase your new to dnb heres what i meant by older JB stuff
This is cool man, especially for your first track. One thing that clearly stands out to me is that the hats are quite loud, especially when they hit faster during the second drop. The kick also becomes a bit lost during the drop, maybe try side-chaining or EQing out some low end in the synth tracks? Nice work though!