Feedback new track ;) ? thanks a lot!

[Mathews]

Hey guys, I again haha. Thank you very much for the feedback, as it helps me a lot in the development of the art of music. I'm on vacation and practicing the production a lot I hope you like it and again thanks a lot!!!!!(no master)
https://soundcloud.com/relasen%2Flooking-for-something

 

[Multiple Noise]

Yo, nice vibes!
I like the variations in it & the usage of the vocals.
Sounds great when it unfolds at 0:40
The snare could be a bit sharper in my opinion & there are missing some breaks
The percussive element at around 1:12 could be a bit more quiet in my opinion (compared to the vocals f.e.).
Good work! feeling it.

 

[Mentor & Moore]

Hi man!

Sounds great! But like Multiple Noise says I'd use a different snare sample it's doesn't fit as well with the rest of the drums

/mentorandmoore/laidback-luke-made-in-june-paradise-ft-bright-lights-mentor-moore-remix-t8/s-VPgHv

 

[maschinistom]

Good on u using hols in ur production bunker rightly said on snare. Also work on arrangement, change the main theme at some point and reintroduce later again with modifications... otherwise good work bro

 

[Mathews]

Yo, nice vibes!
I like the variations in it & the usage of the vocals.
Sounds great when it unfolds at 0:40
The snare could be a bit sharper in my opinion & there are missing some breaks
The percussive element at around 1:12 could be a bit more quiet in my opinion (compared to the vocals f.e.).
Good work! feeling it.

Hey bro , thank you for the tips and support. I took a few pauses and changed the snare. (I repost the track, I hope you like it)! *--*

Hi man!

Sounds great! But like Multiple Noise says I'd use a different snare sample it's doesn't fit as well with the rest of the drums

/mentorandmoore/laidback-luke-made-in-june-paradise-ft-bright-lights-mentor-moore-remix-t8/s-VPgHv

Thanks a lot man . I changed the snare , because that snare was very weird haha. (i repost the track)

Good on u using hols in ur production bunker rightly said on snare. Also work on arrangement, change the main theme at some point and reintroduce later again with modifications... otherwise good work bro

haha Hey my friend , thanks for the support I changed the snare and later, I'll work on a variation of the theme and I'll repost the track. *--*

 

[Smart-E]

good effort bro, same as other guys sort snare but as above posts say u already done it,look forward to checking update