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[Den]

Smashed this out last night just feel its missing something to round it off.... any ideas?

https://soundcloud.com/fourpoints%2Ffour-points-tribe-rat

s-uxlNE

 

[Den]

wouldnt let me post so just add the s-uxINE to the end of the url

/s-uxINE

 

[risto orpus]

Can't seem to open it :/, dunno what's up...