Feedback needed on dancefloor tune (almost done)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by prettyherb, Jun 1, 2016.

  1. prettyherb

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    Hey

    I'm in the final stages of finishing this track.
    Any criticism would be very welcome as i'd like to send this track over to several promotors/labels ect, so i want it to be 'perfect'.

    Its private, so can't embed it here-
    delete one 'h' out of the link!

    hhttps://soundcloud.com/sortedseizure/sorted-seizure-mesmerise-v2/s-Mqr0e


    Thanks!
    Ruben
     
  2. RUSSLA

    RUSSLA DNBF Monarch

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    Sounds pretty good man, that phasey stabby melody really shouldnt be on the drop imo, the drop should be like the 2nd 32bars then bring it back in if that makes sense. Also that melody thing it well too wide, there's nothing in the centre at all, gets a bit confusing to the ears i think.

    Deffo got potential. Maybe a bit more punch/fattness on the snare.
     
  3. Dbrief

    Dbrief Son of the Drum n Bass Father

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    The vocals sick mate! Really works!
     
  4. Rounder RG

    Rounder RG Active Member

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    Sounding pretty good to me. The only thing that jumped out at me was the little drum fill at 3:20 which sounds a bit clumsy.

    You can also use the BB codes to avoid all this fiddling around with urls. I gave up whilst trying to listen on my phone. The URL=LINK is your best option.

    https://xenforo.com/community/help/bb-codes

    You should end up with something like the below, might get you a few more listens as people don't want to work that hard. Get it sorted and i'll remove all this from your thread :).

    Listen Here : Sorted Seizure - Mesmerise
     
  5. Mentor & Moore

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    Sounds good to me! Great track man!


     
  6. Derelicts Of Tomorrow

    Derelicts Of Tomorrow Breaksmith

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    not my style but well produced non-the-less nice one bruva