Feedback me?? Minimal dnb (wip)

[Benburgeon]

Yo, just wondering if anyone can give me some feedback , I wanna make more depth in the bass maybe but I only have operator vst on ableton at the moment

https://soundcloud.com/urgeonsound%2Flibra-wip

 

[xiris]

repost this in the right section and you'll probably get feedback

 

[Northern Seagul]

fettered sound and boring composition. It's dnb man. need or more dynamic in track, or more deep sounding, bassline for example.
also.. it will be good track, if u will work on structure and sounding