Feedback!?....Faces of War intro (dark dubstep)

[joka89]

yo guys, been trying to make a dubstep tune got the first bit so far......what u guys think i should add and any ideas on what i could do next? any feedback on this would be sick aswell

http://soundcloud.com/joka89/dark-dubstep

 

[joka89]

anyoneeeee? lol

 

[SoveX]

Not long enough to give feedback, Sounds like an intro. put up a longer clip?

 

[bulletstorm]

I agree, make a longer version.
this part is the intro I assume, and it seems fine for an intro.
it could maybe use some more variation, but I don't care much for intro's, it's the drop i'm interested in.