feedback!?.......Be Mine intro (liquid dnb)

W3st

Unsigned DnB Producer
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#3
K it has some good ideas.
1. lower the vol on that bass stab, its too loud in the mix.
2. Like the atmos but it needs more size to it, seems like the track is missing some depth
3. Kick sounds good on my speaks, snare could be a bit louder and thicker.
4. try adding a subtle kick build

5. for the drop, use your bassline stab but don't use a sustaind note pattern.

start with that!

oh and check out my track and leave some feedback if u could: http://dnbforum.com/showthread.php/138586-Whaaaales!!!-W3st-From-the-Depths-(ft-Sho-Nakashima)
 

Nucleoid

Nucleoid Drum & Bass
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#5
the second one is definitely better, but I still think you could bring up the overall level.
also some more bass would be nice.

as I noted on the previous version; some movement in the synth would be nice.
As a last note: maybe double the build synth signal and pan one to the left and one to the right. Then start it from a little lower frequency. This way it has much more impact, without interfering with your drums :)

Good concept anyway. Keep it up!
 
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#6
safe for the feedback mate! yeah still getting my head round logic watching tutorials so should be getting better soon lol. Yh will have a mess around with that synth and beef it up more!
 
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