Feedback and possible collab

[Dubsta]

Hi guys, been messing about with this track today….. Hit a dead end with it…. So maybe some feedback and ideas and if anyone fancys collabing / finishing it hit me up.

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fdj-dubsta%2Fliquid-roller-to-collab-on

 

[Manu Forti]

I like it mate i think after the drop the absence of the pad does it no favours though. id play around witht he pitch on the pads and vocal -12 personally (they seem to be the key intrest in the song) and see if i can get that to fit but thats just me, experiment with those elements and mabye some chnages to the bass... sounds crisp anyway.

 

[Dubsta]

thanks.... i did play around with the pads at first and kept them in after the drop but the subs didnt fit, so maybe i might chabge the subs, maybe a more smoother a longer note.
cheers tho matey