heya kantango,
nice tune this,
drums sound nice tight n snappy but i can hear something and im not sure whether its intentional......
i can hear a double splat on the kick drum at the beg of each bar, more noticeable in the drop, it sounds like youve layered a couple of kicks and one is slight off bar n hits just that mili 2nd afterwards.
Also i think the bass could be lifted a little and the spacing off the paddy sounds is sitting in the same tunnel space as the vocal, try pushing the pads out a bit wider and let the vocal cut throught the middle of ya mix
im not slating ya tune dude cz its a pukka tune, the structue, the arrangement and the overall tune idea is spot on!!
just tryner give you some constructive crits
and if the double hit on the kick drum is intentional then fair enough
Keep up the good work
Respect
Bass-Maniacs
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