fEARaNDlOATHING - Chaha Flock

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  1. fEARaNDlOATHING

    fEARaNDlOATHING New Member

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    This is a track i just spent the last while slaving over. Made some n00b mistakes while in the production process. But HERE it is.
    I really wanna hear what you think of it, and where it could be improved upon. I'm still pretty much a beginner at this.
    thanks.
     
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    Ur melodic sounds are way too loud and it sounds really muddy, and the melodies dont really fit togheter i think. everything drowning toghter in a big mud :p had to be honest, va hear ur still a beginner:) keep up the work ull get there:)
     
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    thanks for the feedback, how would i change it to be clearer?