Experimental track for some feedback ( tribal reecey ting and what not)

[sweetleww]

yo guys! any feedback would be great

http://soundcloud.com/sweetlewsound/far-out-preview

cheers,
Lew

 

[subprime]

I like all the elements you have there so far, it just sounds a bit sparse at the minute, like an intro or something. Bit stop/start

 

[Psychoholic]

Yeah nice one but the bass has a weird pop on the end